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Smoker from One Piece by ~icemouth:iconicemouth:

Categories Fan Art > Cartoons/Comics > Traditional > Movies/TV

©2009-2010 ~icemouth
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Ok finally i draw smoker :D
Used my own shade style - hope u like it

Copyright by Eiichiro Oda!

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~2-d-Kamek Jul 13, 2009, 9:08:38 AM
well done! the perspective was drawn out quite nicely ^^ and i like the way you shaded him and all the detail. the only thing i was say is to maybe work a little on the hands, but moreso the one in front (XD same as you said to me)

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“Fawful sings a song of bad! Mushroom Kingdom is so sad! All of it is for Fawful! And the… rhyme with… that.” ~Fawful

"Ah! Once again we meet, like two large, hairy Vikings on a storm-tossed schooner!" ~Dimentio
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~icemouth Jul 13, 2009, 9:32:34 AM
hehe thanks :)
well i think the hand in front is quite good...but i dont rly like the smaller one in the background i dont know why xD i tryed to fix it but well... ^^
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~2-d-Kamek Jul 13, 2009, 11:42:52 AM
^^ it is good! i just tend to put alot of detail in hands that have that kind of perspective. but he does where big gloves so i understand.

my Smoker picture was done around 2006, so i've greatly improved. that was the year when i first started drawing anime.

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“Fawful sings a song of bad! Mushroom Kingdom is so sad! All of it is for Fawful! And the… rhyme with… that.” ~Fawful

"Ah! Once again we meet, like two large, hairy Vikings on a storm-tossed schooner!" ~Dimentio
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*Orsus Jul 13, 2009, 2:04:47 PM
you asked me what I think? he looks gorgeous ! :omg:

I like how you draw the perspective ... I know you need alot more time because the hand itself is bigger as, the rest of the body!...

How much time do you needed for that?

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~icemouth Jul 13, 2009, 2:23:01 PM
thanks first ^^
i think i draw this ..about 2 hours maybe with some little breaks... but u know its purpose that the hand is bigger ...because its an perpective view of it... u can imagine its like his hand would be right infront of ur face ^^
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=SirCrocodile Jul 16, 2009, 9:10:59 AM
Looks cool...I'd add some black pen outline in areas, and mix pen/pencil for darker shadow.. and maybe shade darker in the background behind smoker, like the smoke is surrounding him...

Good action shot!

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The closer you stand to the lighthouse, the darker it gets. -Japanese proverb
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~icemouth Jul 16, 2009, 10:25:34 AM
thank you
but at the moment i do not have enough equipment for working on your suggestion ^^
anyway i hope i get something soon ^^
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~nostalgious Aug 4, 2009, 11:58:44 AM
looks good! Hmm I think you might want to take note of where the light is coming from so you can produce a more convincing shading (especially on the hand in front). Keep up the awesomeness!
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~icemouth Aug 4, 2009, 2:24:26 PM
thanks for the advice ^^
the light is comming from the front...so i think its okey...but yiu are right in fact i should have change the shade on the hand :)

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